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Emen the Hedgehog - New FC :D

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Oh man. I'm so happy and proud of myself! :D I finally created my very first SONIC FC! :iconvictoryplz:

I'm tired of not having one!! -_- I'm tired of all these people who have one when I don't! I'm tired of being asked for a commission and then not having any Sonic FCs avaliable! :pissed:

Well those days are over! :D

EDIT: I got a better bio!

Emen the Hedgehog Bio

Name: Emen the Hedgehog
Age: 14
Species: Hedgehog
DOB (Date of Birth): December 3rd
DOC (Date of Creation): December 3rd, 2010
Favorite Color: Gold
Favorite Animal: Hedgehog (XD)
Love Status: Taken (Miku the Hedgehog, another one of my FCs)
Looks: Three quills, bangs, Blue shirt, white gloves with blue wrist rings, Gold medallion with an E on it that is called an "Edallion".
Likes: Thunder, Nice people, friends, having fun, etc.
Dislikes: Fighting, Rubber, Haters, The negative and eyeblinding things that popularity does.
Powers: Thunder, Lightning, Able to sense lies, etc.
Strongest Attack: Lightning Vortex
Personality: Nice, sweet, cool, sometimes can't take a joke, he's very hard to fool, and is a good guy to be with, etc.

Emen belongs to ME! :iconmariomario54321:
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

O mai, I just LOVE writing critiques <3

SO I'LL DO EXACTLY THAT :U

First off, the positives:

The shading, I can't shade to save my life T3T
But it's simple and clean, which I like.
The rainbows. I know I'm going to get murdered for this one day, but I love rainbows 8D

Now, some things you could work on:

Anatomy is hell, and my eyes went straight to how square his body is, you could easily round him up so he looks less box like.
The feet are a little off and the right hand doesn't match the left one (which looks awesome 8D) and his clothing could use a bit more folding and such.

Since he's a Sonic OC though, it's not the most ORIGINAL drawing, added on to the fact that I've seen tons of yellow hedgehogs around da. Since he's your first you could always add on things to make him more original~ c:

Did you draw this with a mouse?
Tablet? Or on paper and scanned/colored it?
Just wondering c:

Thanks for being a victim of my terrible critiques having critiques open c:

KTHXBAI